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2010-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

학생이 쓴 원문

-.-Are you angry? hahaha~ Really many homework!! I will very hard my homework^^* I think I will buzy until december 20. I hope fast of times. I am tired. Happy weekand~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I’m not angry at you, don’t worry. I just gave you a lot of homework for your improvement. I’m sorry that you feel that way. Maybe next time, I can give you some homework that will fit you. I believe you can finish all of those. Take care! ^_^ -.-Are you angry? >> Correct hahaha~ >> hahaha! Really many homework!! >> You gave me a lot of homework I will very hard my homework^^* >> I think that it will be very difficult for me to finish all of it. I think I will buzy until december 20. >> I think I will be busy until December 20. I hope fast of times. >> I hope that time runs fast I am tired. >> Correct Happy weekand~ >> Happy weekend!

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