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>>> T. James
when i was working in singapore, i had the orientation as a new worker.
>>> When I was working in Singapore, I had the orientation as a new worker.
At the time, all new staff gathered one place and we were tought what the company\'s goal, history and about its.
>>> At that time, all new staff gathered in one place and we were taught what the company\'s goal, history and about it.
Also we toured inside and outside of the company. so i was able to adopt quickly.
>>> Also, we toured
inside and outside of the company. So I was able to adapt quickly.
an
orientation nomally does someting a lot.
>>> An orientation normally does something a lot.
first, introduction and knowing each other. next knowing the goal. and then orientation by manager or representers. between some sessions we have break.
after then they keep explaning theirs.
>>> First,
introduction and knowing each other, Next knowing the goal, and then
orientation by manager or representative. Between some sessions
we have a break, after that they will keep on explaining.
As
a result, i think that orientations make us be member quickly.
>>> As a result, I think that orientation make us aware about our company.
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