Wow congratulation!!
학생이 쓴 원문
1.When were_ you in London?
2.We didn't live_ in a flat when we were in Paris.
3What _were_ you _lose_ yesterday?
4.He _didn't_ magic tricks at the party.
5.Mandy _didn't_ tidy up her room on Thursday.
6. Did_ Frank _share a room with Henry when
they were_ in Rome?
7.I _don't like_ Physics at school.
Thank you teacher you already check all of my homeworks!!
what a diligent teacher!
Maybe that's the reason why you have full schedule until midnight.
That means you are popular and famous for diligence.
You can have a good self esteem.
I have the rest of story of my life in Daejeon but I want to get up early in the
morning to go to swimming pool.
I heard the news that the population of your country achieved one hundred million.
Wow congratulation!! some experts said that country sincersely can grow its culture, economy after getting population over an one hundred million.
Anyway I hope you sleep comfortably!!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I\'m sorry that I wasn\'t able to check this homework last night.
It is because I didn\'t have internet connection at home.
Thanks for your compliment. I hope so that I have a lot of students. Hihihi!
I hope that you are having a great day.
Talk to you tonight. Enjoy the rest of the day.
Teacher Nina
1.When were_ you in London?
>> Correct! 2.We didn\'t live_ in a flat when we were in Paris.
>> Correct! 3What _were_ you _lose_ yesterday?
>> What did you lose yesterday. 4.He _didn\'t_ magic tricks at the party.
>> He didn\'t do magic tricks at the party. 5.Mandy _didn\'t_ tidy up her room on Thursday.
>> Correct! 6. Did_ Frank _share a room with Henry when they were_ in Rome?
>> Correct! 7.I _don\'t like_ Physics at school. >> I did\'t like Physics at school.
Thank you teacher you already check all of my homeworks!!
>> Correct! what a diligent teacher!
>> Correct!
>> OR: What a diligent teacher you are.Maybe that\'s the reason why you have full schedule until midnight.
>> Correct! That means you are popular and famous for diligence.
>> That means you are popular and famous because of your diligence. You can have a good self esteem.
>> Correct!
>> OR: You have a high self esteem. I have the rest of story of my life in Daejeon but I want to get up early in the morning to go to swimming pool.
>> I still have a lot of story about my life in Daejeon but I want to get up early in the morning to go to the swimming pool. I heard the news that the population of your country achieved one hundred million.
>> I heard on the news that the population of your country achieved one hundred million. Wow congratulation!!
>> Wow! Congratulations!
some experts said that country sincersely can grow its culture, economy after getting population over an one hundred million. >> Some experts said that the country an grwo its culture, economy after having a population more than one hundred million.
Anyway I hope you sleep comfortably!!
>> Anyway, I hope that you will sleep comfortably.
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