wow/... I will keep trying!!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello? It is hard to writing. But It looks like fun.
I start to practicing the \'to-v\'grammar now.
now. I make a poem for practicing the \'to-v\'
<I think.......>
I think, I hope to need more times for get some rest.
I think, It need changing to Korea high school\'s self-study after school until 10P.M
I think, I can do it and It is not hard to go to great university.
Just need my efforts^^
I will go to great university! This is [Name] good plan.
I will try It to go to great university. I Can Do It !!!!!
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강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
It is hard to writing. But It looks like fun.
>>>Writing is hard, but it looks fun.
I start to practicing the \'to-v\'grammar now.
>>>I started practicing my \'to-v\' grammar.
I make a poem for practicing the \'to-v\'
>>>I made a poem while practicing the \'to-v\'
I think, I hope to need more times for get some rest.
>>>I think, I need more time to get some rest.
I think, It need changing to Korea high school\'s self-study after school until 10P.M
>>>I think, we need to change Korea\'s high school self-study after school until 10 PM.
I think, I can do it and It is not hard to go to great university.
>>>I think I can do it, and it is not hard to go to a great university.
Just need my efforts^^
>>> I just need to put in some more effort.
I will go to great university! This is [Name] good plan.
>>>I will go to a great university! This is my plan.
I will try It to go to great university. I Can Do It !!!!!
>>>I will try to go to a great university. I can do it !!!!!
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