Wow it is wonderful!
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is 11/29 Monday and I went to school..
the fifth time was basket ball...
I get 4score in the basket ball game!!!!
i was happy. beacause.. today... I success \'5try / 4goal\'!!
Oh@@@@@
I\'m happy today!!!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
the fifth time was basket ball...
>> We played basketball at the fifth period.
I get 4score in the basket ball game!!!!
>>I scored four point during the game.
i was happy. beacause.. today... I success \'5try / 4goal\'!!
>>I felt happy because I scored four points.
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