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Hi Ssun!
You did a good job here.
I guess you are a person who really likes fashion.
Keep practicing!
~~ Teacher Sharon
It is different for each time.
>> It is different each time.
But I think I usually choose bright color to wear when I am happy.
>> However, I think I usually choose bright colors to wear when I am happy.
When I am happy, I wear the clothes of fresh style such like pink,yellow and white colors clothes.
>> Whenever I am happy, I wear clothes with fresh style like pink,yellow and white clothes.
I can also wear down colors sometimes.
>> I can also wear clothes in earth tones.
However, it also looks happy.
>> These clothes also make me look happy.
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