write a day you will always remember.

2018-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

First of all,I should remember my phone english class. I wish, I would say in english everything. But , Sometimes I don't remember What i have to do.I must plan our class to speak english very well.I will try to study more.And Thank shane. If i didn't understand .You spoke slowly.

강사 첨삭

I am already excited to talk with you Miss. [Name]!

See you later. C\")

~Teacher Shanee^^,


First of all,I should remember my phone english class.

>>> First of all, I should remember my phone English class.

I wish, I would say in english everything.

>>> I wish I could be able to express all of my thoughts in English easily.

But , Sometimes I don\'t remember What i have to do.

>>> But, sometimes I don\'t remember what I have to do.

I must plan our class to speak english very well.

>>> I must plan and practice for our class so I can speak English very well.

I will try to study more.

>>> Correct!

And Thank shane.

>>> And thank you Shanee.

If i didn\'t understand .You spoke slowly.

>>> If I didn\'t understand something, you explained it slowly.

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