Write a diary about what you did from Monday to Wednesday.

2015-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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On Monday to Wednesday I don't have any special plan.I wiil study history to get a good score in Korean history ability certificate examination.I have to listen 100 lecture and study a lot.And I will study math.The planar figure is so hard.So, i will study that one.

강사 첨삭

                Hi [이름]! You\'ve done a great job in writing your composition today. Your writing skills keep on improving. There are only a few corrections about prepositions. Anyway, thank you for sharing me your diary and I hope to hear from you again. Keep up the good work!   ~~T.Kris   On Monday to Wednesday I don\'t have any special plan. >> correct I wiil study history to get a good score in Korean history ability certificate examination. >> I will study History to get a good score in Korean History Ability Certificate Examination. I have to listen 100 lecture and study a lot. >> I have to listen to 100 lectures and study a lot. And I will study math. >> In addition to that, I will study Math. The planar figure is so hard. >> correct So, i will study that one. >> So, I will study that one.  

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