Write a diary about what you did from Monday to Wednesday.
학생이 쓴 원문
On Monday to Wednesday I don't have any special plan.I wiil study history to get a good score in Korean history ability certificate examination.I have to listen 100 lecture and study a lot.And I will study math.The planar figure is so hard.So, i will study that one.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You\'ve done a great job in writing your composition today. Your writing skills keep on improving.
There are only a few corrections about prepositions. Anyway, thank you for sharing me your diary
and I hope to hear from you again.
Keep up the good work!
~~T.Kris
On Monday to Wednesday I don\'t have any special plan.
>> correct
I wiil study history to get a good score in Korean history ability certificate examination.
>> I will study History to get a good score in Korean History Ability Certificate Examination.
I have to listen 100 lecture and study a lot.
>> I have to listen to 100 lectures and study a lot.
And I will study math.
>> In addition to that, I will study Math.
The planar figure is so hard.
>> correct
So, i will study that one.
>> So, I will study that one.
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