write a short essay about your ambitition in life.
학생이 쓴 원문
Now,My ambitious is to travel around the world. I don't think ,it's late. because The retired person think,i'm old. and did nothing. but He lived 40 years longer after retired. and he regretted. i would do anything after retired. so i have studied english for 3 years . i will travei around the world. My dream will surely come true.
강사 첨삭
Hello Lisa,
Thank you for sending your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
Now,My ambitious is to travel around the world.
>> My ambition in life is to travel around the world.
I don\'t think ,it\'s late.
>> I don\'t think it\'s too late.
because The retired person think,i\'m old. and did nothing.
>> A retired person thinks that his old and could not do anything.
but He lived 40 years longer after retired. and he regretted.
>> He had lived for 40 years and regretted not doing anything after his retirement.
i would do anything after retired.
>> I will do everything after retirement.
so i have studied english for 3 years .
>> That\'s why I also decided to study English and I have been doing it for 3 years now.
i will travei around the world.
>> I will travel around the world.
My dream will surely come true.
>> I know my dream will come true.
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