write a short essay about your bedroom. How does it look like? What are things in lt?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have 2 bedroom but rooms space are small. My master room is cosy. There are 2 consoles and 2 drawer.
The drawer on top are 2 nightstand. There are nice frame on the wall also oval shape mirror on the side wall.
My husband loves watching TV. We have a luxury TV that name is signature 65 inches by made LG company.
First time when I moved this APT I was not comfortable because every space are small compared t[이름] the US my previous house. Now I adjusted it. . One of good things when I was cleaning the place it took short time.
We are living on 20th floors. When we go to outside exercise after come back we don’t use elevator instead stairs.
강사 첨삭
Your sentences were great! However, be more watchful with your plural forms ^^
-Teacher Debbie
>> I have 2 bedrooms but they are both small.
My master room is cosy.
>> OR: cozy
There are 2 consoles and 2 drawer.
>> drawers
The drawer on top are 2 nightstand.
The drawer on top are 2 nightstand.
>> On top of the drawer are two nightstands.
There are nice frame on the wall also oval shape mirror on the side wall.
>> There are nice frame s on the wall and also an oval-shaped mirror on the side wall.
My husband loves watching TV.
My husband loves watching TV.
>> correct
We have a luxury TV that name is signature 65 inches by made LG company.
>> We have a luxurious 65-inch TV that is made by LG company.
First time when I moved this APT I was not comfortable because every space are small compared t[이름] the US my previous house.
First time when I moved this APT I was not comfortable because every space are small compared t[이름] the US my previous house.
>> When first moved in this apartment, I was not comfortable because the space is smaller compared to my house in the US.
Now I adjusted it.
>> Now, I got adjusted to it.
One of good things when I was cleaning the place it took short time.
>> One of the good things about living here is that it only takes a short time to clean it.
We are living on 20th floors.
We are living on 20th floors.
>> We are living on the 20th floor.
When we go to outside exercise after come back we don’t use elevator instead stairs.
>> When we go outside to exercise, we use stairs instead of the elevator.
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