Write a story about your favorite person in the world. Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
My mom is my favorite person in the world.
She’s always planned what to do today.
Korean dishes are her favorite food.
I like to go shopping with her and talk about something that happened today.
Although I live apart with her now, I usually call to her and get in touch.
ps. Lyn teacher thank you so much.
Thanks to you, I get better to use English than before. I will come back when I start the summer vacation. Take care💕💕
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna! Thank you for the composition and for the message. I will wait for you. Stay safe! I will see you. ~T. Lyn
My mom is my favorite person in the world.
>>Correct.
She’s always planned what to do today.
She’s always planned what to do today.
>>She always plans what to do today.
Korean dishes are her favorite food.
Korean dishes are her favorite food.
>>Correct. She really likes Korean food.
I like to go shopping with her and talk about something that happened today.
I like to go shopping with her and talk about something that happened today.
>>I like to go shopping with her and talk about what happened today.
Although I live apart with her now, I usually call to her and get in touch.
Although I live apart with her now, I usually call to her and get in touch.
>>Although, I live apart from her now, but I usually call her to keep in touch.
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