Write about a comic strip you\'ve read.
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I read the comic strips about the life of many great people. Because it has a lot of story, so it is long. I recommend it because it is helpful to understand history.
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I read the comic strips about the life of many great people. Because it has a lot of story, so it is long.
>> I read the comic strips about the lives of many great people and because there are a lot of stories to tell about them, these comics are long.
I recommend it because it is helpful to understand history.
>> I recommend it because it is helpful if you want to understand history.
>> or: I recommend reading them because it is helpful in understanding history.
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