write about a memorable experience you had with your best buddy.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have too many experiences to choose one of them.
So I am going to write down the memory that is the recent moment I felt happy with my buddy.
My buddy and I planned to go for a morning run last weekend.
It is the rainy season in korea, so we were worried about the weather.
But weather was perfect to running. No Rain, no sunshine!
We could enjoy the feeling of a perfect fall day while running.
Our destiny was the cafe we often go to.
We ordered cafe latte with soy milk and shared about our daily lives
It made us feel healthier and we felt fullfiied as the same time.
These days, I feel happier in little moments with friends more than big memories.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Soo Bin! You wrote a very heartwarming and relatable story! I love how you described the morning run, the perfect weather, and the time spent chatting at your favorite cafe. Your details make it easy to picture the scene, and I especially like how you noticed that little moments with friends can be more meaningful than big memories. Keep sharing your experiences like this, they’re engaging, thoughtful, and really enjoyable to read!
-Teacher Wela
I have too many experiences to choose one of them.
>> I have too many experiences with my best buddy to choose just one.
But weather was perfect to running. No Rain, no sunshine!
>> However, the weather was perfect for running, no rain and no strong sunshine!
Our destiny was the cafe we often go to.
>> Our destination was the cafe we often go to.
We ordered cafe latte with soy milk and shared about our daily lives
>> We ordered cafe lattes with soy milk and shared stories about our daily lives.
It made us feel healthier and we felt fullfiied as the same time.
>> It made us feel healthier, and we felt fulfilled at the same time.
These days, I feel happier in little moments with friends more than big memories.
>> These days, I find myself feeling happier in little moments with friends more than in big memories.
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