Write about a memorable holiday experience.
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to nur[이름]g home to see my grandmother. it was nice to see my grandmother after a long time. and I had a good rest.
강사 첨삭
Hi! I\'m so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I went to nur[이름]g home to see my grandmother. it was nice to see my grandmother after a long time. and I had a good rest.
>> I went to the nur[이름]g home to see my grandmother. It was nice to see her after a long time, and I had a good rest.
>> I went to the nur[이름]g home to see my grandmother. It was nice to see her after a long time, and I had a good rest.
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