Write about a memorable holiday experience.
학생이 쓴 원문
My brother\'s familiy live in Philippines now, however until few years ago, my brother\'s familiy lived in Korea.
So, my familiy enjoyed together every holiday like a Chu-Seok.
I took care of my nephews and neices.
It was a happy memories.
강사 첨삭
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My brother\'s familiy live in Philippines now, however until few years ago, my brother\'s familiy lived in Korea.
>> My brother\'s family lives in the Philippines now. However, until a few years ago, they lived in Korea.
OR >> My brother\'s family currently resides in the Philippines, but until a few years ago, they lived in Korea.
So, my familiy enjoyed together every holiday like a Chu-Seok.
>> So, my family used to spend every holiday together, like Chu-Seok.
I took care of my nephews and neices.
>> I took care of my nephews and nieces.
OR >> I looked after my nephews and nieces.
It was a happy memories.
>> Those are happy memories.
>> My brother\'s family lives in the Philippines now. However, until a few years ago, they lived in Korea.
OR >> My brother\'s family currently resides in the Philippines, but until a few years ago, they lived in Korea.
So, my familiy enjoyed together every holiday like a Chu-Seok.
>> So, my family used to spend every holiday together, like Chu-Seok.
I took care of my nephews and neices.
>> I took care of my nephews and nieces.
OR >> I looked after my nephews and nieces.
It was a happy memories.
>> Those are happy memories.
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