Write about a recent sports event you saw or read about. What happened?
학생이 쓴 원문
I saw a soccer game it is a very fun and cool, I think they are very tired.
So I saw a soccer game in the tv.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
Here is your first revised composition for today. The corrected version is shown below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Write about a recent sports event you saw or read about. What happened?
I saw a soccer game it is a very fun and cool, I think they are very tired. So I saw a soccer game in the tv.
>>> I saw a soccer game on TV. It was very fun and cool, but I think the players were exhausted.
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