Write about a special event, festival, holiday, or activity celebrated in February.
학생이 쓴 원문
First, my brother\'s birthday 🎂 and Jeongwol Full Moon Festival. It is a to worship the moon.
That day eat vegetables and play jwibulnori, jwibulnori is playing with fire.
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Write about a special event, festival, holiday, or activity celebrated in February.
First, my brother\'s birthday 🎂 and Jeongwol Full Moon Festival. It is a to worship the moon.
>> First is my brother\'s birthday and Jeongwol Full Moon Festival, which is about worshipping the moon.
That day eat vegetables and play jwibulnori, jwibulnori is playing with fire.
>> On that day, we eat vegetables and jwibulnori, which is a game in which we play with fire.
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