Write about a teacher who had a strong influence on you. What did you learn form him or her?
학생이 쓴 원문
He was a teacher who taught me English course in my high school.
He majored in philosophy.
He emphasized the important of the humanities, anthropology, archaeology, aesthetics
I learn what humanities are.He made me think of the value of the life,happiness.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Take note of the use of articles in your sentences.
You have to differentiate general and specific ideas.
Good work!
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
He was a teacher who taught me English course in my high school.
>> He was a teacher who taught me an English course in my high school.
He majored in philosophy.
He majored in philosophy.
>> Correct
He emphasized the important of the humanities, anthropology, archaeology, aesthetics
He emphasized the important of the humanities, anthropology, archaeology, aesthetics
>> He emphasized the importance of humanities, anthropology, archaeology and aesthetics.
I learn what humanities are.
I learn what humanities are.
>> I learned what humanities was.
He made me think of the value of the life,happiness.
>> He made me think of the value of life and happiness.
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