Write about a time in the past when you had to make a difficult decision, and explain what you did.
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Teacher Nina
A year after I started my career at the automobile company right after graduating from college, I studied and applied for another company which is number one or two electronic company in the world.
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I had to go through 4 or 5 interviews one by one in series to reach the final stage of getting a hiring notice from the company.
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Unlike other countries, there is an official recruiting window only once a year for the young college graduates by many big conglomerates in Korea.
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If you fail once, then you have to wait another year.
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>> OR: If you fail once, then you have to wait for another year.
If you fail twice or more, your chances of getting hired becomes almost zero.
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Back then and still now, it was definitely all youth’s dream to work for the company.
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If you are an employee of the company, you could be regarded as a successful person in the society.
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In short, after I passed all the exams and interviews, I was supposed to attend the orientation secession, which was the first day at the company.
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In the morning of the first day, I was at a crossroad.
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