Write about a time when you had an annoying incident.
학생이 쓴 원문
Write about a time when you had an annoying incident.
Seven years ago, my mom was swendled a lot of money. So I had paid for several years.
It was very hard time to want to give up everything.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your answer, this is quite sad, Ms. [Name], see you later in class! =)
~~ T. Ali =)
Seven years ago, my mom was swendled a lot of money. >>> Seven years ago, my Mom was swindled a lot of money.
So I had paid for several years.
>>> Correct
It was very hard time to want to give up everything.
It was very hard time to want to give up everything.
>>> Correct
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