Write about a time when you had to work in a team.
학생이 쓴 원문
- What was the project or goal your team was working on?
Our Team\'s goal is smooth operation of program
- What role did you play in the team?
I operate main program and occur errors.
- What were the challenges and successes, and what did you learn from the experience?
I feel a sense of accomplishment and joy of recognition.
강사 첨삭
Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
Our Team\'s goal is smooth operation of program
>> Our team’s goal was to ensure the smooth operation of the program.
I operate main program and occur errors.
>>I operate the main program and handle any errors that occur.
I feel a sense of accomplishment and joy of recognition.
>> I experienced a sense of accomplishment and the joy of recognition.
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