Write about an experience you had that required to accept criticism and how you benefited from it.

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I agree with you. We should be open for criticisms.

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Teacher Nina

Experts say that we should be open to criticism from our friends, colleagues, or supervisors.

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However, most of time, we are offended and get upset when we are criticized regardless of whether it is right or wrong.

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We even respond to the criticism in a defensive way, which means we do not admit it and even try to offend the other by criticizing him/her more aggressively.

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It is right that we should realize we are all human and everyone makes mistakes and everyone has problems.

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When someone criticizes us, we take that and try our hardest to improve that part about us.

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And then we will be much better soon than that person who is still criticizing others and not doing anything to make himself a better person.

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We should remain cool when being criticized and try to look at ourselves in a more objective manner.

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The flip side is that when you criticize others, we should be very careful.

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Our criticism to others should be constructive and not to aim at hurting their feelings.

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