Write about how you feel about blind dates.
학생이 쓴 원문
It is very dangerous. There are numerous and different people in the world.
Who does know who is fixed on a blind date?
Sometimes we may be excited a new and unknown person.
But if someone who wants a date doesn\'t have any chances, blind date may be useful for them.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]. good to know about your thoughts on blind dates here, well, thank you and see you in class next time! =)
~~ T. Ali =)
It is very dangerous. There are numerous and different people in the world.>> Correct
Who does know who is fixed on a blind date?
Who does know who is fixed on a blind date?
>> Correct
Sometimes we may be excited a new and unknown person.
Sometimes we may be excited a new and unknown person.
>> Sometimes we may be excited about a new and unknown person.
But if someone who wants a date doesn\'t have any chances, blind date may be useful for them.
But if someone who wants a date doesn\'t have any chances, blind date may be useful for them.
>> But if someone who wants a date doesn\'t have any chance, blind dates may be useful for them.
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