Write about one of your favorite English movies.
학생이 쓴 원문
I love movie,The lord of rings most. This movie includes everything I like.
My favorite points are fantasy, adventure, war between human and goblin and hansome elf. In addition, I don\'t like love story. This movie contain little love story.
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A great day to you, Ms. [Name], thanks again for this composition, see you later, take care~! =)
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I love movie,The lord of rings most. >> I love the movie The Lord of the Rings the most.
This movie includes everything I like.
>> Correct
My favorite points are fantasy, adventure, war between human and goblin and hansome elf.
My favorite points are fantasy, adventure, war between human and goblin and hansome elf.
>> My favorite points are fantasy, adventure, war between humans and goblins and handsome elves.
In addition, I don\'t like love story.
>> Correct
This movie contain little love story.
>> This movie contains little love story.
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