Write about some common lunch boxes or Doshira in your city.
학생이 쓴 원문
It is called Doshirak. There are numerous kinds of Doshirak. It\'s base food is rice.
We can add main dish and side dishes. Because there are many kinds of combination of side dishes, I can\'t talk common lunch boxes.
강사 첨삭
Well, it is interesting to find out about Doshirak from you, Doctor Alice, thanks again and have a nice day ahead! =)
~~ T. Ali =)
It is called Doshirak. >> Correct
There are numerous kinds of Doshirak.
>> Correct
It\'s base food is rice.
>> Correct
We can add main dish and side dishes.
>> Correct
Because there are many kinds of combination of side dishes, I can\'t talk common lunch boxes.
>> Because there are many kinds of combination of side dishes, I can\'t think about common lunch boxes.
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