Write about some of your activities in the evening.

2024-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I study in the evening. I have dinner in the evening. I watch TV in the evening. I take a shower in the evening. I play games in the evening.

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Write about some of your activities in the evening.

I study in the evening.

I have dinner in the evening.

I watch TV in the evening.

I take a shower in the evening.

I play games in the evening.

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>>> OR: I\'m pretty busy with a lot of things in the evening, such as studying, having dinner, watching TV, taking a shower, and playing games.

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