write about something [material] you received that has been meaningful to you.
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Hi there JM!
How are you? Anyway, thanks for writing this.
I hope you\'ll take note of the corrections I left below.
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
It is the most meaningful to receive receipt collections from my girlfriend.
>>> The most meaningful thing I received from my girlfriend is a collection of receipts.
Namely she was making a book with receipt.
>>> Correct!
Receipt with comment was written in the book.
>>>Receipts with comments were pasted on the book.
To be specific, It is role of diary.
>>> To be specific, it\'s like a diary.
If we read it, We can be able to remember what we did for 8 years.
>>> If we read it, we are be able to remember what we did for eight years.
In addition, Picture which was taken in that place was add to the book.
>>> In addition, pictures taken in that place were added to the book.
When I see the picture, We keep taking about that place and some stories.
>>> Whenever we see the pictures, we keep talking about the places we\'ve been to and the memories we got from there.
And, We joshed changed appearance each other.
>>> And we josh about how each other\'s appearance changed.
By these reasons, That book composed of picture and comments is the most important to me.
>>> For these reasons, that book composed of pictures and comments is the most important to me.
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