Write about the best advice your mother ever gave you?

2014-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When I was young, my mother didn’t talk a lot. I do not remember any verbal or written advice that she gave me. Although she has not talked to me to do this or that, neither given me a piece of advice, I could understand what she wanted and expected from me. She taught me via acting rather than talking. I was well aware of how she sacrificed her life and how much she loved me. She has never talked to me how hard it was for her to work for us. Her sacrifice, love, and commitment spoke louder than any verbal advice. Sometimes, an action is worth a thousand words. Think about the case that you made a big mistake and you expected a harsh reprimand from your teacher or parents, but they kept quite without telling you anything. Wasn’t it scary and didn’t you feel that you got more pressured? Even when I behaved in a way of falling short of her expectations, she did not get upset and she kept showing her trust on me. She always supported me whatever I did, which was valuable advice for me.

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Hi Sir [이름]! I am sure that you are really proud of your mom. Thanks for sharing this to me. I appreciate it a lot. It\'s another inspiring composition, I think some mothers aren\'t that expressive in words but they do it in action. Have a great night ahead. Talk to you soon, Teacher Nina   When I was young, my mother didn’t talk a lot. >> Correct I do not remember any verbal or written advice that she gave me. >> Correct Although she has not talked to me to do this or that, neither given me a piece of advice, I could understand what she wanted and expected from me. >> Correct >> OR: Although she has didn\'t ask me to do this or that, neither given me a piece of advice, I was able to understand what she wanted and expected from me. She taught me via acting rather than talking. >> Did you mean: She taught me via actions rather than talking. I was well aware of how she sacrificed her life and how much she loved me. >> Correct She has never talked to me how hard it was for her to work for us. >> Correct >> OR: She never told me how hard it was to work for us. Her sacrifice, love, and commitment spoke louder than any verbal advice. >> Correct Sometimes, an action is worth a thousand words. >> Correct Think about the case that you made a big mistake and you expected a harsh reprimand from your teacher or parents, but they kept quite without telling you anything. >> Correct Wasn’t it scary and didn’t you feel that you got more pressured? >> Correct Even when I behaved in a way of falling short of her expectations, she did not get upset and she kept showing her trust on me. >> Correct She always supported me whatever I did, which was valuable advice for me. >> She always supported me whatever I did, which was a valuable advice for me.

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