Write about the best book that you\'ve read and explain why you chose this book.
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My best book is Harry Potter. It was very interesting and make me to think about the fantasy. Also, it has some common people. So it makes me to think that it is real story.
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My best book is Harry Potter.
>> The best book for me is Harry Potter.
It was very interesting and make me to think about the fantasy.
>> I find it interesting and it makes me think about some fantasy world.
Also, it has some common people.
>> correct
So it makes me to think that it is real story.
>> So it makes me think that it is a real story and not just a fantasy.
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