Write about the biggest city in Korea .
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An-dong is the biggest city in geographic size.
I think Seoul is the biggest city many ways.
Because many people live in Seoul, and Seoul developed a lot.
Blue house and Gyeongbokgung is in seoul.
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Write about the biggest city in Korea.
An-dong is the biggest city in geographic size.
>>> CORRECT~~
I think Seoul is the biggest city many ways. Because many people live in Seoul, and Seoul developed a lot.
>>> But I think Seoul is the biggest city in many ways because many people live in our capital city, and it has been developed a lot.
Blue house and Gyeongbokgung is in seoul.
>> Also, the Blue House and Gyeongbokgung are in Seoul.
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