Write about the first time you were on a plane.
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I first time were on a plane is happy and nervous because happy is my first travel so I\'m happy and nervous is if have an accident for me.
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Write about the first time you were on a plane.
I first time were on a plane is happy and nervous because happy is my first travel so I\'m happy and nervous is if have an accident for me.
>> I was happy and nervous the first time I was on a plane. I felt happy because it was my first travel and nervous because I was worried about accidents happening.
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