Write about the importance of setting goals. How do personal goals impact your motivation and succes
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If I didn\'t set a spesific goal for something that needed a long period like a speking English fluent, I would need more time.
beacuse, I would face more trial and errors.
Goal helps us to do not miss directionality. that\'s why the goal is important.
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Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
If I didn\'t set a spesific goal for something that needed a long period like a speking English fluent, I would need more time.
>> If I didn\'t set a specific goal for something that requires a long period, like becoming fluent in English, it would take me more time.
beacuse, I would face more trial and errors.
>> This is because I would encounter more trial and error.
Goal helps us to do not miss directionality. that\'s why the goal is important.
>> Goals help us maintain direction, which is why they are important.
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