Write about the last movie you watched. What happened in it?
학생이 쓴 원문
I watched animation movie yesterday. It was very funny because minions are stupid but they are very cute and funny.
The movie named is Superbad4. I think it is my favorite movie.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Aiden!
I love how you described why the movie was funny — your excitement really comes through! 🎬 Next time, you could add a little detail about your favorite scene or Minion moment to make your writing even more engaging. Great job sharing your opinion!
~Teacher Polly
>>I watched an animated movie yesterday.
It was very funny because minions are stupid but they are very cute and funny.
>>It was very funny because the Minions are silly, but they are also very cute and funny.
The movie named is Superbad4. I think it is my favorite movie.
>>The movie is called Superbad 4, and I think it is my favorite movie.
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