Write about the most interesting fairytale you\'ve read.
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The most interesting fairytale I\'ve read is Harry Potter. It\'s theme was very interesting, and the concept of the story was also interesting. Although I read it several years ago, I still remember it.
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The most interesting fairytale I\'ve read is Harry Potter.
>> correct
It\'s theme was very interesting, and the concept of the story was also interesting.
>> It\'s theme was very interesting, and the concept of the story was also fascinating.
Although I read it several years ago, I still remember it.
>> correct
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