Write about the most shocking advertisement you have seen.
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Hi JM!! Thanks for sharing this. I am a little bit confused about some things so I will ask some questions about this on Monday, okay? See you!
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I`m proud of genious advertise man who name is \'이재석\'.
>>> I\'m proud of a genius advertisement designer named \'이재석.\'
I want to introduce his one work of art.
>>> Correct!
If you search his name on the website. you can see his several work including industrial advertisment.
>>> If you search for his name on the internete, you will see several of his work including industrial advertisements.
for example, To give a message for the people who can`t feel that many contries were annoyed by drought.
>>> For example, he made an advertisement to warn the people that many countries are affected by drought.
To inform that he use a big building. so, it is best way to inform many person.
>>> For that advertisement, he used a big building. He thought that it\'s a good way to make people aware of the situation.
To be specific, we can easily see the water tank on the rooftop.
>>> Correct!
he just used it. on the wall, he drawed small africa who is on his head water tank.
>>> On the wall, he drew a small Africa and on top of it was a water tank.
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