Write about the most shocking advertisement you have seen.

2017-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I`m proud of genious advertise man who name is '이재석'. I want to introduce his one work of art. If you search his name on the website. you can see his several work including industrial advertisment. for example, To give a message for the people who can`t feel that many contries were annoyed by drought. To inform that he use a big building. so, it is best way to inform many person. To be specific, we can easily see the water tank on the rooftop. he just used it. on the wall, he drawed small africa who is on his head water tank.

강사 첨삭

Hi JM!! Thanks for sharing this. I am a little bit confused about some things so I will ask some questions about this on Monday, okay? See you!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


I`m proud of genious advertise man who name is \'이재석\'.

>>> I\'m proud of a genius advertisement designer named \'이재석.\'

I want to introduce his one work of art.

>>> Correct!

If you search his name on the website.  you can see his several work including industrial advertisment. 

>>> If you search for his name on the internete, you will see several of his work including industrial advertisements.
 for example, To give a message for the people who can`t feel that many contries were annoyed by drought.

>>> For example, he made an advertisement  to warn the people that many countries are affected by drought.
 To inform that he use a big building. so, it is best way to inform many person.

>>> For that advertisement, he used a big building. He thought that it\'s a good way to make people aware of the situation.

To be specific, we can easily see the water tank on the rooftop.

>>> Correct!

he just used it. on the wall, he drawed small africa who is on his head water tank.

>>> On the wall, he drew a small Africa and on top of it was a water tank.

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