Write about the person that you admire the most
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T.G.I.F Sir [이름]!
Treat yourself this weekend, take a rest, spend some time with your family and friends.
Wow! You had a good boss!
I am so happy that you met him.
It is really nice that he never yelled at this employees in the office.
Because in some dramas or movies, a boss usually shouts at his/ her subordinates.
Thanks for sharing about him.
Teacher Nina
When I first got a job, there was a team manager who was my direct boss.
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He was marvelous in all aspects.
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He was a great lealer.
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He knew how to motivate his employees, build teamwork, and work together to achieve company’s goals.
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His leadership style was not to press or direct his employees using his authoritative power as a manager, but to make them self-start.
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He was willing to spend his valuable time out of his hectic schedule to couch and help them resolve any issues or difficulties that his team members were facing.
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He has never yelled at this employees in the office and always maintained a smile on his face.
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Even if an employee made a mistake, he didn’t condemn or blame him.
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Instead he has tried to cover-up and protect him.
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He was a nice person, plus he was smart, intelligent, and generous.
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He has acute sense of business.
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He was very creative and always pursued innovation and changes for improvement.
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When we went on an offsite workshop or picnic, he cooked and did the dishes.
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