Write about the topic, “How music enhances storytelling in movies or shows.”
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Generally, we use words when people and people communicate and share their feelings.
>> Generally, we use words when people communicate and share their feelings.
In movies and shows, we use words to convey meaning and continue the story.
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However, sometimes it is more effective when conveying meaning with an actor\'s facial expression than with many words.
>> However, sometimes it is more effective to convey meaning through an actor\'s facial expression than with many words.
In this case, music can further maximize the communication of meaning.
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After a movie or show, many people will definitely remember the scene in the movie and the music that comes with it rather than the actor\'s lines.
>> After a movie or show, many people will definitely remember the scenes and the music that accompanies them rather than the actor\'s lines.
If we forget a movie or show we saw after a while, when we happen to hear some music, we will recall the movies and shows we saw again.
>> If we forget a movie or show we saw after some time, hearing the music from it may help us recall it again.
Music not only has a magical effect that creates unforgettable scenes in movies or shows, but it also reminds us of our beautiful or heartbreaking memories that we have forgotten.
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Music is not only storytelling in movies or shows, but it is still storytelling in our lives.
>> Music is not only a form of storytelling in movies or shows, but it is also storytelling in our lives.
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