Write about the topic: \"Staying Healthy and Active During COVID\".
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David, this is such a well-written and thoughtful reflection on your habits and values. It\'s wonderful to see how much care you take in staying healthy and productive. Keep it up. You’re inspiring!
~ T. Lia
My job is that I have to see a patients while looking at mouth.
>> My job involves examining patients while looking at their mouths.
But I am the healthiest and least prone to disease in my family.
>> CORRECT
One of the biggest reasons why I can stay healthy is that I wash well.
>> One of the biggest reasons I stay healthy is my good hygiene.
I wear gloves to treat my patients, but I always wash my hands clean after I treat my patients.
>> I wear gloves when treating my patients, but I always wash my hands thoroughly afterward.
And when I get home, the first thing I do is to take a clean shower from head to foot.
>> When I get home, the first thing I do is take a thorough shower from head to toe.
I always wash my hands and feet thoroughly after a close outing.
>> CORRECT
The first principle of health is cleanliness.
>> CORRECT
During Covid, I tried to keep my mind and body healthy through stretching and yoga at home because it was difficult to exercise outside.
>> CORRECT
Even if I stay indoors for a long time, I don\'t lie down in bed except for sleeping time, and I read a lot of books and watched a lot of Netflix movies for my own inner knowledge.
>> Even when staying indoors for a long time, I avoided lying in bed except during sleep and spent time reading books and watching Netflix movies to enrich my knowledge.
I watched a movie with my family and tried to improve each other\'s relationship.
>> I watched movies with my family to strengthen our relationships.
I wish I had played an instrument like a violin at that time.
>> CORRECT
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