Write about vending machines in your country and how amazing they are.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are very many kinds of vending machines. Among these things, Vending machine which cooks La myoun is most interesting and amazing. It is installed at Han river park. I want to see and experience this machine.
강사 첨삭
Great wok here, Doctor Alice, yes I hope to see this kind of vending machine too.
See you tomorrow, and have a nice day! =)
~~ T. Ali =)
There are very many kinds of vending machines. >> Correct
Among these things, Vending machine which cooks La myoun is most interesting and amazing.
>> correct
It is installed at Han river park.
>> Correct
>> Han River Park
I want to see and experience this machine.
>> Correct
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