Write about what makes you different from other people you know. How do you think this will affect y
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Good day to you Sir [이름]!
Happy hump day. ^^
Thank you so much for your composition.
Each person is unique. ^^
We should be thankful for what we have and for what we are.
You did a perfect essay. See you in class.
Teacher Nina
What makes you different from others?
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Obviously, our physical appearance is the primary factor that makes you different.
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You can be identified and distinguished among others because of your face, voice, height, hair style, posture, or body size.
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We may have different personalities, traits, and skills.
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You may have your own unique scent.
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You have things and habits that make you seem alien to your family and friends.
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The differences can be criticized or appreciated by others.
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The important thing is that you should make differences that could be respected and appreciated by others rather than criticized.
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It is all related to personal branding.
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How do you make yourself different in a positive way?
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The interesting thing is that when you are young, everything is different.
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You are searching for identity and you need to stand out.
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However, as you get older and wiser, you realize that you are actually no different.
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In fact, you are exactly the same as everyone else.
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