Write about what makes you different from other people you know. How do you think this will affect y

2016-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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What makes you different from others? Obviously, our physical appearance is the primary factor that makes you different. You can be identified and distinguished among others because of your face, voice, height, hair style, posture, or body size. We may have different personalities, traits, and skills. You may have your own unique scent. You have things and habits that make you seem alien to your family and friends. The differences can be criticized or appreciated by others. The important thing is that you should make differences that could be respected and appreciated by others rather than criticized. It is all related to personal branding. How do you make yourself different in a positive way? The interesting thing is that when you are young, everything is different. You are searching for identity and you need to stand out. However, as you get older and wiser, you realize that you are actually no different. In fact, you are exactly the same as everyone else.

강사 첨삭

Good day to you Sir [이름]!

Happy hump day. ^^

Thank you so much for your composition.

Each person is unique. ^^
We should be thankful for what we have and for what we are.

You did a perfect essay. See you in class.

Teacher Nina

 

What makes you different from others?

>> correct

Obviously, our physical appearance is the primary factor that makes you different.

>> correct

You can be identified and distinguished among others because of your face, voice, height, hair style, posture, or body size.

>> correct

We may have different personalities, traits, and skills.

>> correct

You may have your own unique scent.

>> correct

You have things and habits that make you seem alien to your family and friends.

>> correct

The differences can be criticized or appreciated by others.

>> correct

The important thing is that you should make differences that could be respected and appreciated by others rather than criticized.

>> correct

It is all related to personal branding.

>> correct

How do you make yourself different in a positive way?

>> correct

The interesting thing is that when you are young, everything is different.

>> correct

You are searching for identity and you need to stand out.

>> correct

However, as you get older and wiser, you realize that you are actually no different.

>> correct

In fact, you are exactly the same as everyone else.

>> correct

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