Write about your best day last week.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the best day last week is start the my school winter vacation because it is very fun.
But it\'s a shame.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below. Enjoy the rest of your evening!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Write about your best day last week.
I think the best day last week is start the my school winter vacation because it is very fun.
>> I think the best day last week was start the of my school winter vacation because it was really fun.
But it\'s a shame.
>> CORRECT~~
>> [NOTE: THIS IS GRAMMATICAL BUT IT DOES NOT FIT THE FIRST SENTENCE. THEY ARE CONTRADICTORY BECAUSE YOU MENTIONED IN THE FIRST SENTENCE THAT IT WAS FUN BUT CALL IT A SHAME IN THE 2ND SENTENCE, THEREFORE, IT GOT ME CONFUSED.]
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