Write about your ideal spring vacation
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that spring vacation is seeing flowers and eating fresh spirng vegetables.
I went to see cherry blossoms to with mom. Sometimes I went to green lawn with my dog.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name], thanks for answering the question. Well, I am glad that you have a very ideal spring vacation. Take care, see you. =)
~~ T. Ali =)
I think that spring vacation is seeing flowers and eating fresh spirng vegetables.>>> Correct; just the spelling of spring
I went to see cherry blossoms to with mom.
I went to see cherry blossoms to with mom.
>>> Correct
Sometimes I went to green lawn with my dog.
>>> Correct
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