Write about your memorable experiences when you started driving.
학생이 쓴 원문
I didn\'t drive well and especially I couldn\'t change car lines and park.
One time, I went into a turnabout and couldn\'t get out. So I beg other driver for me to go out. Another time, I couldn\'t park and I should ask stranger to park instead me.
강사 첨삭
I am smiling reading your composition here, Dr. [Name], kk, I know how you feel in cases like what you have experienced in driving. Keep up the good job in writing and see you later in class~ !
~~ T. Ali =)
I didn\'t drive well and especially I couldn\'t change car lines and park.>> Correct
One time, I went into a turnabout and couldn\'t get out.
One time, I went into a turnabout and couldn\'t get out.
>> Correct
So I beg other driver for me to go out.
>> So I begged for the other driver for me to go out.
Another time, I couldn\'t park and I should ask stranger to park instead me
>> Another time, I couldn\'t park and I should ask a stranger to park instead of me.
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