Write about your most memorable experience.

2019-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I have been studying Japanese before learn English. So I studied Japanase hard during 5 yaers. When I learned Japanese second year, we went to Japan with classmate and teacher. We stayed Japan houses for 2 night 3 days. There were acquaintance of teacher. I could level up confidence, speaking and listening skill. Also I could experience about Japan culture. It was most memorable experience of me.

강사 첨삭

Hello Eun Young,

Thank you for your opinion but you can express yourself more. Nice job!!!!

Learning to speak English well may be the best thing you can do to improve your life. No matter who you are or what your position is, you must keep fighting for whatever it is you desire to achieve. So achieve your goals in studying English!!!!

T. Jeny



I have been studying Japanese before learn English.

>>I have been studying Japanese before learning English.

So I studied Japanase hard during 5 yaers.

>>I studied Japanese hard for 5 years.
When I learned Japanese second year, we went to Japan with classmate and teacher.

>>In my second year of learning Japanese, I went to Japan with my classmate and my teacher.
We stayed Japan houses for 2 night 3 days. There were acquaintance of teacher.

>>We stayed in a tradition Japanese house for 2 nights and 3 days. It was teacher\'s acquaintance.

 I could level up confidence, speaking and listening skill.

>>It helped me be confident with my speaking and listening skills.
Also I could experience about Japan culture.

>>I also experienced and learned about Japanese culture.

It was most memorable experience of me.

>>It was the most memorable experience of me.

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