Write about your most memorable Friday.

2024-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Last Friday is most memorable Friday for me because I don\'t have most memorable Friday the reason is Friday it\'s the same everyday. So I\'m sad 😥 so I want special Friday.

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                                 Write about your most memorable Friday.


Last Friday is most memorable Friday for me because I don\'t have most memorable Friday the reason is Friday it\'s the same everyday.
>> Last Friday was the most memorable for me because I don\'t have the most memorable Friday since Friday is the same every day.

So I\'m sad 😥 so I want special Friday.
>> So I\'m sad that\'s why I want a special Friday. 

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