Write about your most memorable happening a few days ago.
학생이 쓴 원문
My trip to Gyeongju is the most memorable because I go to the beach, I eat crabs and swim the swimming pool I want go on a trip one more time but I going to overseas travel on winter.
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Write about your most memorable happening a few days ago.
My trip to Gyeongju is the most memorable because I go to the beach, I eat crabs and swim the swimming pool.
>>> My trip to Gyeongju was the most memorable because I went to the beach, ate crabs, and swam in the swimming pool.
>>> OR: Gyeongju was my favorite trip. I had fun at the beach, enjoyed eating crabs, and relaxed in the swimming pool.
I want go on a trip one more time but I going to overseas travel on winter.
>>> I want to go on another trip, but I will travel overseas in the winter.
>>> OR: I hope to travel again soon, but I plan to go abroad this winter.
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