Write about your most recent dining experience.
학생이 쓴 원문
My most recent dining experience was a delicious baked Brie cheese with tomatoes, fresh basil, and lots of garlic.
After baking the cheese with the ingredients in the oven, I put it on bread. It was so delicious, I could eat it every day!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]ny!~
You know I like eating something garlicky hihihi, so reading this one makes me hungry >.< Yay! ^^
Chammy
My most recent dining experience was a delicious baked Brie cheese with tomatoes, fresh basil, and lots of garlic.
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>>The last meal I had was a delectable baked Brie cheese with loads of garlic, fresh basil, and tomatoes.
After baking the cheese with the ingredients in the oven, I put it on bread. It was so delicious, I could eat it every day!
>> After baking the cheese with the ingredients in the oven, I put it on the bread. It was so delicious, I could eat it every day!
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