Write about your most recent vacation.
학생이 쓴 원문
My most recent vacation is very fun because I\'m a swimming in the pool and eat a crab.
So my vacation is very fun.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below. See you later!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Write about your most recent vacation.
My most recent vacation is very fun because I\'m a swimming in the pool and eat a crab.
>>> My most recent vacation was a lot of fun. I went swimming in the pool and ate crab.
So my vacation is very fun.
>>> Overall, it was a really enjoyable trip.
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