Write about your ultimate dream in life and why?
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Great afternoon, Sir [이름]!
For the length of time we\'ve been together, I can say that you are really a warm-hearted person,
You are one of the great people I met. I always learn something from our conversation in class.
I always look forward talking to you everyday. I\'m not kidding. ^.^
I am sure that your wife and your daughter are really proud of you.
I hope that all of your dreams will come true and that you will always be healthy.
Saying thank you wouldn\'t be enough for me to show how grateful I am to be your partner in your English journey.
Have a good day.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
I also wonder what my ultimate dream is.
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When I ask myself the question, I don’t have clear answers.
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>> OR: When I ask myself that
Indeed, for what am I working and living?
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Where am I heading to?
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What will the end of my life look like?
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At the last moment, how will I evaluate my life when reflecting on the past time I had gone through?
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Would I be satisfied with how I lived?
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When I assess my life myself up to date, I would give 80 out of 100 perfect scores.
>> When I assess my life myself up to date, I would give 80 out of 100 perfect score.
It means that there are many things that I feel regrettable.
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>> OR: It means that there are many things that I regret.
I should have studied harder in school and made a more effort to develop better personality.
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I can vaguely say that my ultimate dream in life is to be successful at work and in my personal life.
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What is success to me?
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Success doesn’t only mean getting promoted and socially becoming a high profile person, but also getting recognized as a valuable employee regardless of the job position.
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At home, I want to be a good husband and daughter.
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In the end, I want myself to be remembered as a warm-hearted person.
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