Write an essay about a time when you were greatly affected by peer pressure.

Thank you very much JM for sharing this experience.

You should be thankful to your friend. Anyway, don\'t ever let peer pressure negatively affect you.

See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

When i was in teenager, I`ve been affected by peer pressure.

>>> When I was a teenager, I\'ve been affected by peer pressure.

To be specific, one of friend was sensitive to latest fashion.

>>> To be specific, one of my friends was sensitive to the latest fashion trend.

To maintain relationship with him, I spent the time and money to shop with him.

>>> To maintain a relationship with him, I spent time and money to shop with him.

But when we told about respective dreams that we want, He give me advice for me.

>>> But when we talked about our respective dreams, he gave me some advice.

because He just want to be a designer of clothing but i`m not.

>>> He said he wants to be a fashion designer but I had a different dream.

so, He just recommended me stop to follow his life.

>>> So, he advised me to stop following his path.

At that time, he had a confidence in his future, maybe I`m not.

>>> At that time, he was confident about his future but I wasn\'t.

thanks to his advice, I deeply ponder that what is my dream.

>>> Thanks to his advice, I deeply pondered on my own dream.
 Without his advice, I Would have failed to find my future.

>>> Without his advice, I would have failed to create my own future.

because he help me to deter[이름]e my future (my job) by talking about that continually. 

>>> He helped me realize my own dream by talking to me continuously.
 Thesedays, he is act as designer and runing his brand and I make an effort to be a expertise in machinery.

>>> Now, he is already a designer building his own brand name and I am a person who exerts effort to improve my knowledge in machinery.

It is my greatly affected by peer pressure.

>>> It\'s how I was affected by peer pressure.